Oh my God...
I am finally DONE with this piece, and my hands are killing me, remind me to not use a mouse for colouring any other piece of work I might do. I wonder if my hand isn't going to be amputated.
Cloud... Why the HELL do you have to be so hard to colour? And how come I didn't just give up on you?
I like the golden glow. 
I LOVE your blush by the way and you know I'm gonna stalk you in my dreams every night. 
*COUGH* 
His hair and his clothes were driving me mad. Especially the hair...
I think I still should fix the clothes but I just can't do that now.

The frame is weird too, I might change it. But let's wait with this.....
I wasted a good few hours on him, but he was definitely worth it.

Despite him driving me crazy.
I am exhausted, it's 1am at the minute, and I AM going to bed.Lines:
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Cloud Strife, Final Fantasy (c) SquareEnix


I love his face, and the blush is great too, it adds a lot of personality
Are the glowing lines symbolic in any way? Or were you just trying out the visual effect? Personally I'd try to keep the effect subtle, at least around the dark areas like the clothing, I find them a bit distracting around there.
And thinking of Cloud makes you cough? I guess that's why they call it lovesick
He doesn't look excited to me, but tired and ashamed is a definite.
The real reason behind the glowing lines is... That he looked so out of life without them, so I just had to add them in.
No it doesn't really make me cough, I just wanted to put a bit of humor in the description.
Thanks for the feedback!
Is there anything specific he's ashamed of
Yes, of course I know that it doesn't really make you cough. IRL coughing would indicate gagging and as a reaction to a guy that's a REALLY bad sign
As always, my pleasure
Heehee, I know you were too, I still laugh a bit about it.